Can you please edit/revise thisThe Nullification Crisis would have tested the skills of any leader. Although the crisis was a definite challenge,…

Can you please edit/revise thisThe Nullification Crisis would have tested the skills of any leader. Although the crisis was a definite challenge,…

Can you please edit/revise thisThe Nullification Crisis would have tested the skills of any leader. Although the crisis was a definite challenge,…

Can you please edit/revise thisThe Nullification Crisis would have tested the skills of any leader. Although the crisis was a definite challenge,…

I think that you are off to a good start here.  Instead of calling it a “professional” handling, I might indicate that Jackson’s handling proved the strength of the executive branch.  Since you are giving him an “A” as a grade, I think that his handling of it probably goes a bit beyond mere “professionalism.”  I also think that right after that opening sentence, you could include the information about the Tariff of 1828, why it was passed, and the reaction to it.  Here, the information about South Carolina’s disdain could be integrated.  At the same time, I think you need to make it clear that Jackson’s strength was not merely determination, but actually being able to pass the Force Bill and marshal the federal troops to ensure that South Carolina does not secede and attempt to “one up” the President. I think making some of these changes will bring a bit more focus and harnessed energy to the paragraph.
Can you please edit/revise thisThe Nullification Crisis would have tested the skills of any leader. Although the crisis was a definite challenge,…